Wow! This song deserves a review, so here:
Pros:
- Liking the production a lot! Good combination of electronic and orchestral elements (mainly electronic, but the snare drum at 0:26 is a nice touch.) I can totally imagine this in a video game.
- The chord progressions are great. They sound very professional to me.
- I've never heard anything that sounds like this! That really separates you from other Newgrounds artists, which, of course, is a good thing.
Cons:
- It's hard to find cons to this piece! The piece is screaming for a lead instrument. Personally, I think an ocarina or whistling sound would be pretty badass. Maybe an off-kilter synth could work, too. Mess around with different things. Melody is what hooks people once they delve into your song; keep them interested!
- The ending was a bit abrupt. Maybe try letting the instruments naturally die down after the second loop, a.k.a. stop the loop but let the tracks reverberate. It would still be abrupt, but would create a nice lingering effect. Or, you can begin looping the piece again and fade out after a few measures. Whichever one works.
You obviously have a ton of talent. Plus, you have knowledge of chords and production. With a couple tweeks, this piece will be perfect! Keep up the great work! :D