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[XS - Free Radical]

Very Creative

I think you're effort was overall very solid. Here's a more detailed review:

Pros:
- The song's mastering is good; no over-compression.
- Both styles of music you were going for are clearly defined (DnB drum and classical strings).
- It also loops very well.

Cons:
- The song is repetitive. Try creating a memorable melody for each section of the song.
- Also, try branching out instrument-wise. Try adding a piano or something else to take place of the strings in some parts.

Good job, and good luck in the future!

Jimmypig responds:

Thanks very much, Im glad you enjoy it and next time I write I'll remember what you said (y)

[Kirby: Butter Building]

I'm Liking This!

Here's a breakdown of the song:

Intro (0:00-0:12) - nice buildup; perfect lead synth and background sequence.

Second Melody (0:12-0:24) - also good; nothing sounds off.

Repeating First Melody (0:24- 0:37) - the change in synth keeps the song exciting. Switching the focal point from the melody to the counter-melody is ingenious!

More Melody Repeating (0:37-0:49) - sounds good. One note, though: the background synth pad seems to lag a little. Maybe using a different synth or taking off reverb and delays can help.

Change Up (0:49-1:14) - using the piano was very creative to break up the song. The distorted kick/snare at 1:02 is a little unpleasant to the ears, though.

From 1:14 onwards it repeats.

Overall, a very solid effort. Only two parts seemed a little off (pad and distorted kick/snare). The mastering is well-done, also.

One more tip: try cleaning up the loop; it's sounds a little off.

Good job, and good luck in the future!

Cam3leon responds:

Wow, thanks for that VERY thorough review! Much appreciated, I'll take it all into consideration next time! :)